Umm... I don't know what tips I could give, but I could try. Her eyebrow is kind of high on her forehead, so you would need to lower that a bit. Her eye could be a little smaller (to make room for the eyebrow), and more hair could be added where her eyebrow is now. *Thinks* I hope I made sense... If you understood what I tried to say, then I'm sure those changes would make it look a bit better.^_^ I hope I was of some help.-__-