It's great and all but everythings a bit too straight. Try giving the clothes some wrinkles and fowlfan was right try making the legs a bit curvy too. I love the hair and all though =P

OK OK i will help u!! the face and the hair are AWESOME!! and the clothes are cool too! now wat im working on now and u should too is legs and arms, mine are either too long, short fat, annorexic....well urs dont have that many problems! just me.....but ur legs (drawing haha) are like straight, legs have curves and stuff, trust me it takes a while to do.im still doing it. i still think ur doing better than me tho!! how bout giving ME some advice?! haha