Tht's really good. I was soo into the little story and the girls expression is superb!

wouldnt u die if ur out of chakra? becuase chakra is like life. every time u use it ur toying w/ ur life. i like it.

dude, that's one crazy doujinshi. i can't wait to see the rest! and why does she look at her hand with fear? i wonder, is she a blood-phobic like tsunade?