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    viperqueenie

    Otakuite | Posted 04/02/07 | Reply

    I luv the hair, U coloured it really nicely. Suggestions... Well, I guess I kinda agree with everyone else, maybe outlining more, and not making it look so stiff. But I like it anyway, U got my vote ^-^! (I can't really say anything anyway I can't draw as good as U) Well C ya ^-^

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    Emmah

    Otaku Legend | Posted 03/31/07 | Reply

    This is really good!! I think that maybe her bow thingy could be a little bigger. But other than that it looks awesome!

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    emptyHEAD84

    Otaku Legend | Posted 03/30/07 | Reply

    hmmm suggestions... well some of the proportions looks off to me.. like the arms are too thin and the shoulders should slope a little more and be less point to give more of a feminine look and she looks kinda stiff. you should try to draw characters with more of a 'flowy' aspect lol and she as no boobs. ichigo still has a little something there XD and maybe a little more shading on the face. it would look awsome ^^ the colorings pretty cute though, nice job on the hair ^-^

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    igneouspiritfeonx

    Otaku Legend | Posted 03/30/07 | Reply

    I think it looks good ^^ Suggestions?... Uh... I think you should've outlined a little darker for areas like the clothes. But it I think it looks nice =) Keep it up!! *votes*

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    MewKittyCatChan54

    Senior Otaku | Posted 03/30/07 | Reply

    i really like this one! your first? wow thats pretty good! id prolly be on my 500th and still be worse lol! i like the colors and the shading looks really good! her shoulders look a bit manly but hay wat do i know! (my friend is always saying that my drawings have manly shoulders) well great job!! i think this deserves..a...vote...yea!