i think it looks fine! keep drawing!! *votes* visit my site, too please!

thank you but if you colored it with charcoal i doubt ut'd look like a mess! :) :( :D :C :P :Z

Looks good to me. If I colored it with charcoal it would be one big massive smear of a picture XD

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OMG KISSHU!!!!! Sorry Im a really big Kisshu fan he just so damn cute XD. I think you did an awsome job with the charocoal and your right it is hard to use since its so messy. Kick ass job I love it. =^-^= NYAA!!! =3 ~Kyoko Kuroeiki