I think I know why you think it looks weird. The arm holding the ice cream is too short, even for a chibi person. Also it is impossible to twist your wrist into that position without being double jointed, and Roxas' fingers need to be wrapped further around the ice cream stick. This is not a drawing crit exactly, more like a sociologic one. Sora looks like he is chesting Roxas, there is no 'personal space' guys have a bigger respect for personal space, so their bodies should be slightly further apart. Also, instead of leaning back, Sora shuold be leaning forward. But I'm just nitpicking. Besides, theyre practically the same person and are very emotionally close so there would be less of a personal space rule between them. All things considered, I absolutely love it. This pic is ultra-chibi!

Kyaaaa!!!! Sora!!!! Roxas!!!! *squeel* I love you guys!!!! Sora: WTF? Roxas: It's another fangirl, run!!!! animegirly2: Wait up!!!! *favorite&vote* animegirly2 is offline chasing after Sora and Roxas...

ROXAS!!!!! **tackles** ... **turns around** :D SORA!!!!!! **tackles** Lol, wonderful job! I haven't seen any KH fanart on here for a while now. D: It's so cute. X3333 Keep up the fantastic work!

cute ^_^ sooo cute ^_^ love it ^_^ nice drawing ^_^

kawaii!!! i love it! it's so cute! what do u mean weird? i think it's great! u rock!

So cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I add it is my favorite!

Awwwwwww, so cute! ^3^ Mi-chan~

hmm? weird? I dunno bout that, haha I think it looks great! and its cute too ^^ good job!

Aww, it's so adorable!! Your drawing doesn't look weird at all to me!! Great job^_^

I think it looks really cool!

I think it`s awesome! it doesn`t look weird *death from gaara*

I looks normal to me, I like it! =3