Helen!!! Tis good picture! Kat xxxxx (hope your feeling better! We miss you!)

Thanks sooooooo much, everyone! I am really grateful to you all! I'm hoping I get much better than this in the future!

Wow great start! In time you will be amazing! Great pose though working on the body proportitons will be good. Your definatly gonna be an amazing artist! Love the hair.

Hey there!! i agree with ouroboros, there is quite a bit of blackness :( sorry otherwise, the pose is good, it's an excellent start Gratinia! Nice one!! ^^

Thanks! I really appreciate the help-I might be able to draw it again or something...thanks again!

cropping would have made this look better (Points to the large amount of black space) the face is very plain, don't be afraid to draw bigger it'll giev mroe room to add details. anyway this is better then my begining manga stuff from 3 years ago.