Well...it's a very good start for a first try. The face kinda emotionless, don't know why, I think the mouth doesn't go with the eyes. Also, you do hands pretty well. Left arm (her right) looks like you may have nicked it with the eraser. Good work though ^^

well its your first one so nice try. keep up the good work okay and never give up because trust me.... I used to draw worse then you but I practiced and look were I am at now. so go for it girl!!