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    manacloud

    Otakuite | Posted 12/17/06 | Reply

    heh, you dont have to explain why you did or didnt draw her without clothes. How I see it, its an artists view. Looks good and good luck in the competition.

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    Ayame Clyne

    Otakuite | Posted 12/16/06 | Reply

    Thankies for the contructive criticism! yay, okay, first of all, she doesnt have any clothes on because I thought it would kill the piece, it wasnt actually meant to be a fan service piece, not my intention at all. I am still a big noob when it comes to drawing purely, i've never taken any classes, I just read books. So if i were to give her clothes the wrinkles would be very off and it would of murdered it -__-' So the no clothes decision was a drawing problem on my part. Same with the wings, again, total noob, i dont draw often so copy and paste was the thing to do, plus, arent we all symetrical? *is proud of her wings T_T* Also the drawing was meant to show a womans simple beauty, i COULD of done the whole ribbon wrapped around her, but i think there is alot of that already, i wanted it to be unique, that is why the breast cancer ribbon is on the pelvis. I think putting it somewhere else is too common, for example the arm of breast. I want to thank everyone for voting and the comments! really means alot! *huggles all*

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    billybob6

    Otakuite | Posted 12/15/06 | Reply

    umm, this is like REALLY great and all, but i dont like it that she doesnt have any cloths. X[ and the wings look exaclty the same on both sides along with the bow and ribbon. i mean good luck and all, but you shouldnt copypaste to mirror stuff like wingd. :D its still good. i really like it though, its real AWESOME!!!!! ^v^

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    ramen elf

    Senior Otaku | Posted 12/15/06 | Reply

    IT's beautiful but have her wear something

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    Fortuna Jewels

    Otaku Legend | Posted 12/14/06 | Reply

    I think it has got a good chance of winning. Great work and keep it up. Make a few more too when you can. *FJ*

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    MilleniumRing

    Senior Otaku | Posted 12/14/06 | Reply

    awesome pic. she really pretty =)

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    Bulma

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/14/06 | Reply

    Great job. Very vivid and tasteful.


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    kybeary

    Grand Otaku | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    Wow that's really good! I love it! She looks so pretty! Great job!

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    rangiku ap

    Otakuite | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    beautiful, ayame. just beautiful.

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    Chan01924

    Otakuite | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    AWSOME I LOVE IT really good ^_^ extreme talent right there

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    hitsukuya

    Otaku Legend | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    I like this! The wings are really well done and I love how you coloured it! Great job^^ Yay, pink hair looks good on her! ^^

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    night reaper

    Senior Otaku | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    The pic looks great. And do not worey about the pic you well not get in trable for it. :]

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    Lindus

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    It looks like you can reupload the other entry without deleting it in the 'Edit Artwork' section. Never used it, but you should probably use it. XD Nice entries, btw. Best of luck!

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    utenafangirl

    Otakuite | Posted 12/13/06 | Reply

    lol you should have seen mine then its even more risky. XD pretty much yours the same as mine just i dont have text (even the title)