the mask cover is on the wrong eye and it's nothhing to do with twilit it's twili and if your going too wright twilit you should have finished the word. it's "Twilight Princess"

the body looks good but you need to draw the head better because i like the skinny like body its perfect but you need to put those computer like signs on her arms and you did good on the eye too but add some darkness to it and color for at least the eyes