I love how mamori manages to block his bullets with a mop XD must be a super mop! if i tried anything like that im sure the mop would break fairly fast XD As for constructive... Hmm... I really don't know what to say =S I think the eyes could use the tinyest bit of tweaking along with his earrings, but to tell the truth I think it looks great ^^ YA-HA!

O_O ur right! he does look funny lol I like the ears too! He looks like itchigo kinda from bleach when he is really pissed :P