I think it is really cute. I love the kissing scenes. I do have to admit that it does need some work but so do mine^-^. Keep it up!

I think Inuyasha looks okay, but kagome's legs are too skinny and short for her body. I also think you could improve the tree by drawing two or three longer lines for texture instead of a bunch of shorter lines, but that's just me. To see what i mean look at my sketch titled three's company. The border around the pic is very cute though, and it looks like u put a lot of effort into this, so i'll vote for it. I hope you improve your kissing scenes in the future, can't wait to see em!