Weeellll Mr.Kiba Wolf, heres why you think paradise dosunt exsist, I beleive paradise is not a place its a dream that you must walk to follow so you my learn on the way, paradise is something you dream of but it dosnt ecsist, on earth, but in your heart, thats paradise ;)

thankyou! i dont mind you saying what needs to be changed.. im always open for ideas to make it better. anyways glad you like it! ^^