Okay, I'm not really one to talk because I messed up on my pic of him, but i'll try to help. Make his pupils smaller, and draw on his eyelashes and eyebrows. Don't slant his mouth downwards so much. Make his chin more pointed, give him a thiner neck, and make his shoulder spikes wider and rounder. Heh, you probably want me to shut up now, right? Keep trying though, this is a really good pic! If you look at my pic of him, you'll see i screwed up his head too!

you should keep doin wat you are good at because I drew him once but now i can't draw him anymore.