I don't see anything wrong with it, but maybe you had something completely different in your mind's eye right? but fear not, this picture turned out amazing regardless ^^ I think she's amazing! ANd I really like the snake too!

I thin it turned out beautifly. It looks all sketchy and gives a sort of blured feel, which I like. ^^

The colors are so soft. Great job with the pose and folds within her clothes.