I like the pattern; I do not like the "sakura" label on the shirt. I love the hair; I don't like so much the mouth (is it the line? Or the darker blob?) The placement of hands a bit high on the left, it seems. The pattern on the shirt looks great however. You really tried to make Sakura your own, and, I feel, mostly susceded. Kudos.

wow! i REALLY lik tha pattern u used for her shirt-thing^^. she looks beautiful!! keep doin drawings!!! ~ja nee ~Yukino Tokisaka~