that is really cut, but it looks like they are crunched together, i would focus more on proportions and perspective, but other than that it's very very good, keep on going!!!

Awwwww! So cute! ^.^ I like it!

Awwww, more cute~ness~!!! Don't worry, they don't look like they were doing anything naughty x3 You did a great job! *giggles* I wonder how Seph can sleep xD ♥Jenna

She looks like she's drooling... XD I do like it though.^^

*laughs* That's so cute. And it's all good, it doesn't really look like they're doing anything naughty, anyway XD

That's so cute! Don't worry. It doesn't look like they're doing anything naughty.