it does look better in colour. NICE!! with EVIL eyes again.... O_O

It is very good you did a very good job on coloring it.

ok ok I like it... but the one thing that bothers me is the fact that all Homunculi had purple eyes. I mean wraths were blue, but he also ate the stone, which made him "Evil" and this person looks evil, and they're wearing dan'ts homonculi outfits, therefore she would have had to have eaten the stones and her eyes would be purple... but this is cute i like her, and I think you did a great job! Just the eye thing bothered me... no offense! please don't take offense to that...