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    shadow101

    Otakuite | Posted 08/13/06 | Reply

    nice drawing though the words could be some what dark and then it be right on

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/06 | Reply

    It was great! You've got a wonderful imagination, and great artistic skills to back it up too! I would definately like to see more of Airy, it maybe a little too much to ask, but it'd be great if you drew a manga of her entire story! But that's just me being greedy ^^ The only thing I have a little problem with is that it's quite hard to read the text...inking it in may help it alot, or type it in using photoshop or something :P otherwise, great work!

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    Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/06 | Reply

    woooh... yes please!! lol this is great!! Love, ~Lexi-chan~

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    Resident Robot (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/06 | Reply

    That is awesome. I'd LOVE to see more!! And the last panel was SOOOOOO cool! Oh, one thing. (-gasp-) Some of the text is a little light, and I can't see it too well. Maybe type it out? I don't know, just a thought. :]