I have to say, That you have potential but you still need to work.
You can not be lazy when drawing your backgrounds,
It seems as though Roy has no legs either, Edward you are able to get away with considering his, growth problem.
Also, You should remember EVERY part of the picture matters. Including writing, or any after thoughts of any kind.
Make you're writing perhaps more comical, and if you are not a very good writer. You should leave any bubble blanker and write in a computer text, like Comic MS.
It is a very funny comic and I do believe you will go far in drawing, It only takes practise correct?
-Blood
Haha, Waffle! Oh, God, I love this!
@)----------- *~this is a rose for my father, Brigadier General Maes Hughes...may the angels protect you always, papa.~* :sobs:
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