like the other person said the neck is a little too long, but you'll have all of your life to work on that :)

You really need to work on smoothing out the lines don't you? Also, the neck is a little to long (same with almost all of your more resent pictures!) Again, I say that with a pen outlining, smoothing out the lines, shortening the neck a little, and a little color will make it look a lot bette! for the most part, it's pretty good, just try thoughs tips! I'm sure that you will become a lot better with practice!