Is this supposed to be Menou Kurashina? She's not at all a "ghostly girl" (although she is a ghost, a nice one anyways).

Prettttttttttyyy... Didn't you have another version to this? This one still looks really good, though. I think the border around her is maybe a bit too... "deep"? But I think you did okay on the ghostly part... Especially her eyes... + saeki:midori