Kawaii!! Wow, what did you trace it with? It looks like the manga. My only suggestion is that the face line looks kinda off. Next time, watch out for that and it'll be great. Just suggesting though... Anyways, awesome job!!

Very good! Your penciling is great! The only thing I would consider is to make male eyelashes shorter. When male faces have thicker lashes it starts to look more like a female face. Not trying to be rude or anything, that's just what I would work on.

*Squeals* Miiine!!! Ah! *makes into plushies* Weeeee! ^_^