More more! It looks great for doing it in colored pencil. That stuff is such a pain to erase. Sketchy lines are fine. You're really brave to do your art in something other than pencil, if you ask me.

Oh Please! You did a wonderful job on it! Don't you dare think it sucks! I love sketchy drawings like this, I do that often in my own drawings

(finally looks up the comments)(*sighs*) Why is EVERY single more or less good drawer (I now a few professional ones) tells me sketchy lines suck? Come on, looks @ Blame!/Noise, look at Freesia - they are great works of art AND they are pretty sketchy! (Notes - no single more or less good drawer has ever told Ocean-kun WHY sketchy lines do no good %)

Beautiful sketchness..reminds me of the sketches I do..but..with showing the face..o.o;; GOOD JOB! ^^ - Kitti

Thanx! Actually I meant it to be sketchy. ^^

Nice. Since you're new I'll give advice. When you're drawing clothes lines and shading at the same time, if you do too many little lines for shading in the clothing lines, it'll get confusing and won't look good. Also, the less sketchy, the better.