Very nice. applause, applause. Shes cute and I can imagine this character in a comic book or anime. The hair I think could be a little neater and maybe a little more of it (maybe thats you style I don't know, this is just my opinion)

Pretty ass, clothing and she is awsome very pretty, very awsome, its, beautifully details. great keep it up! ^0^

Again, wuv the outfit! Clothes have never come easy to me. *sigh* But good work, can't wait to see the finished book. Good luck to you & your bro.

Nergh, her outfit is so cute ^.^

To be able to draw like that... Truly amazing. If I may ask, where did you learn, to draw I mean?

Very nice. I really like the details. -Sachiko ^^