I love, love, love her dress! It's so pretty! Also, the mask is really good. The expression seems perfect. Alltogether great job!

Nice line work. Remeber what you want to be focusing on in the picture, areas with the most contrast stick out the most. The wings, and ruffles do this, is this what you want highlighted? I think picking either all color or all black and white would add to the overall composition too. Great job, love to see more :)