I have one thing to say to you Grace: -_- buzz!!! Lol, just kidding.

It looks great! (HAH, i got to see it in the making :p) You need to try to find your OWN style. CREATE KELLSEY!!! You must develope your own way of drawing your eyes! Do not look at pictures any longer! MAKE YOUR OWN STYLE! YAY FOR AAYA!