critiques are probably pointless since this piece is two and half yrs. old, but i guess i could leave a comment. basically, if this wasn't two yrs old, body proportions may need some work. and the face organization as well. basically everything you said in your comment. but it's nice to see how you colord the sleeves to make it look see through. keep drawing. =) and hopefully you didn't see this comment as a flame or anything. =)