This is a really good picture, the lined paper, wel that doesn't really matter! ^_^ it's still good and it's great the way it is!

yah i didnt really want lined paper but that was the only thing i had with me at the time....i started it in the car with my mom on the way to walmart

this is very good. that only thing i can think of that would improve it is not using lined paper. if you prefer lines that up to you, but i think it takes away from the drawing a little. only a little. but i think this is very good. =]