great job! you're missing a few thing but i don't really know what they're called so...anyway i like the hand it looks very cartoony. keep practicing!

That's cute. Is her apron always heart-shaped, or did you add that yourself? Did you draw this on the computer, or scan and color it? A good thing to do when coloring on the computer is to outline everything again at the end--there are a lot of places where your colors are overlapping your lines, and it gives the picture a really messy feel. Having an outline on top would help that.