I'm not good at drawing but I do know good art from bad art no to say that this is horrible I've seen worse the auto-mail is fine but your bodie in general needs some more work the hair is too short other than that keep working hard at it

I think you made his hair too short... and his head needs to scootch over to the right a bit! But that's it. Don't worry about the automail, that's some complicated machinery, and we can tell what it is. ^-^

^^ haha it's cool.. and pretty good to..

Anesome Edo pic, Hoshi-chan! Edo is hot!!! LOL