so...are these your original characters? yeah,good that you have sideviews...but if you are really serious about making comics, then i suggest you draw each frame rather than copying and pasting the same image everywhere. *shrugs* i don't know. it's just a suggestion. sorry, i haven't been following the plot, so i can't answer your question. ^^!

i dont get it... lol, what's the plot???

I like it!!! Although there were a few spelling errors. Cannot wait for the next page, and i'm not sure who should be leader of the chibis... (Red is too tall) ~Red

very well done i want the vampire to win cuz im dark and deranged me likie angel me very likie LMD

Haha! I love it, great job on the paneling, keep it up! ^o^ ~Ki-chan~