hmm not bad! i think its good i think u should color it and very good inking. i also think theres a few places where u could fix it a little! but it's better than my first gaara pic!

Hmmmmm......not bad hey not bad at all keep it up!

The lines are a little shaky. Everything else is great. The pose espically impressive, because action poses are hard to draw. Voteing yes. Lynnsey

the pose here is great; he really looks ready to spring! the action is shown really well. good job! I love the shading, too.

O.Ogaara-chan looks like hes mad!!! nice going!^.*