it think this is really good, lol i used to press hard on the paper to, i think you pic would be more awesome if you inked it ^^

wow! NICE!! XD he looks so cool ^0^

it came out great, nice shading and like u said draw lighter.

Very nice. I like how you did the shading. ^^ But I think it should be a little smoother. Other than that, great job.

you draw really awesome!it kicks ass!

oh... he's hot... Oo wow, could you draw another pic of him plez?