Me gosh!!! This one tells me your style a little more. (^_^ Sweet so. ~keep your eyes on the road~

nice detail on this page. the only thing bugging me is the guy in the last panel. his neck's a bit too long. besides that, great. the host is funny. ^^

neat! ^_^ you really have your own style, and that's important when breaking into the manga field. :) I also like the host the best. good job!

i still like the way you drew the hands and arms. and the host is still my fav. character so far 'cause he looks funny..in a good way. the model malfunc. reminds me of when annikan was pod racing, and he said that last yr. his pod couldn't start. XP no errors here. =) good artwork. nice shade tones. good pacing and framing.

hey!i'm starting to understand the story a bit and the art is still at its best!!

Red is being lazy and only commenting on thsi page though she read all of them tyhat are up. I'm a bit confused on the story, but like it so far. the art is unique, and there are a few typos on the fourth page. ~Red