it's a lot better w/ fewer panels and bolder line art.
I think you should try inking the whole thing once just to see how it looks.
"Transforma-tino jutsu!"
(see the bottom line of panels ;P)
I thought that typo was funny. It's the Latino version ^_^
I handwrite all of my text, I think that helps avoid spelling errors.
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