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    angelservant010

    Otaku Legend | Posted 04/21/06 | Reply

    I like the stadium look!!! What an atmosphere there. (^_^; And host guy. He's thin and skinny. Wickedly, so. ~keep your eye on the road~

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    Orcagirl2001

    Senior Otaku | Posted 04/21/06 | Reply

    i like your drawing style, its unique but i have to agree with freeziepleasy about the bumpy lines. their a pain to clean but in the end it will look much better. interesting switch from "pmg we're gonna die" to "back to the show" its like 'wha?' and your reader wants to see the next page like now. nice job.

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    freeziepleasy

    Senior Otaku | Posted 04/17/06 | Reply

    i don't know what's happening with the "we're going to die before landing"...is there an alien in the story? sorry. i'm not really sure. i like the host guy at the bottom. it's a nice style. but you still have errors. please look over them. and there is some lines that is at the very top of the page that is blocked off from the frames. you should clear that up so the page looks cleaner. the boxes look like they were colored in with a sharpie and there are bumpy lines around the frames that were colored black. you should do more cg work and color it in with a program instead. i don't think the bumpy frames really matter though. but you've got some cool artwork right here. just hope that your errors are fixed so i could read your book. i hope you didn't take all my comments as flames...or insults...whatever you want to call it. this was my honest opinion.

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    GeorgieEviHarri

    Otaku Legend | Posted 04/17/06 | Reply

    Very Good I look forward to the nxt one! Keep up the good work!

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    zephyr light

    Senior Otaku | Posted 04/16/06 | Reply

    your comic is cool!i try to make one,but i get lazy real easily...;P

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    AngelBest Dream

    Holy Knight (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/16/06 | Reply

    Yea this is great remembers me of Tim Burton stile the skiny long arm :D. AngelBest Dream

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    KitsyLove

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/16/06 | Reply

    And again,it's really good^^You really take your time to draw,I don't have the patience to draw so long,haha^^~I can't wait to see the next pages!!~.^