So far... as much votes there is as much comments very good!! (^_^ ~Keep your eyes on the road~

the robot is funny. another nice page. your layout is very good. i always have problems figuring out panels. ^^

i wasn't really sure what that alien thing in the third frame is. and it's kind of hard to read now. when you're putting hyphens (i think that's what they call it), you separate the word by syllable. the word "your" in the 5th? frame should not have a hypen b/c it only has one syllable. something like "window" can be "win-dow". sorry if this sounds like a grammar lesson. please review your grammar. you have a good story and nice artwork, but it won't pass. you have a lot of spelling mistakes in this page and many grammar mistakes as well. you have some words missing in the sentence to make them correct too. and i'm not really quite following with the story anymore. maybe it'll clear up on the next page.

This really good, the 5 panel confused me a bit but its lookin good!

love it hard to read at first but i got it. yeah and the funny face is kool =D keep it up ~Lady Yuna