I love comics... and is seems like you can get a punch or two. (^_^ Though (- - machines are not my favorite type of genre, this seems alright. (=D= ~Keep your eyes on the road~

another great page. one thing though, the first panel should have a much closer shot of the watch on his wrist, since that's your focal point. other than that, its nice.

okay. yeah, you're spelling. definitely..not deffanately...or whatever. and you're missing a punctuation mark after the "hahaha" part. in terms of your art. it's fine. i don't think your artwork is the thing that will stop this story from being published. i think it's the grammar and spelling...and punctuation marks. read it over. look the words up in the dictionary, or else your book is not going to be published.

Im liking this alot!