All the lines are ugly and bumpy. This still needs some work.

Is that Rin? Or just an original character you decided to trace? :|

your pic is great! thats like the only picture of rin on here. you should draw more of her. KEEP IT UP! MF23

YAY FOR FURUBA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^0^

ooooh, i LUV it!! VERY good!! and its okay bout tha wait, it wuz worth it^^. thank u many times over!!!