it would probably be a good idea if you didn't have so many panels. 12 is quite a lot. When you have a lot of panels, that makes all of them pretty small so it's hard to make them clear. Tiny panels "crunch" the art so it can get jumbled, messy and hard to read.
I tend to put too many panels in my comedy pages, but I don't think I've put in more than 10 before.
Usually I try for no more than 7.
In my real comic, more than 6 is too much.
Right...... Ok well um it's ok but try to make yor spelling nicer you how like it's slopy well that makes it hard to read... For me any way. Oh and try to have abetter plot I mean really whats the point of this oh and try to make them a little drawn better. k. Any way sorry if it sounded like I was being harsh but it's the truth.
o.o; well to me it's just a tad bit distrubing is all..its only to me though so..i'm probley just a stick but that wasn't funny to me...good artwork thou all it did was look a little messed up while doing the different poses but yeah...i'll be silent now..nyah.
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