It's a very good pic! Shading is very nice! :D Good job on the eyes! ^^ XD

this pic is great i love it ^^ kep up the good work ♥

nice job!! i love how you did their facial expressions, the only thing to do might be to model the hands alittle bit to look more natural and clean up the pencil marks...but you did a really good work! :)

Aww, very kawaii! I like this pic a lot, nice job on their eyes! :]]