i like it, only next time when you draw rain try and make kinda splashing off of the character a little. heh, this could almost pass as an original, but its still good.

I liketh the hair, and Vash's expresion. The rain looks good as well, though it looks more like 'tis raining behind him instead of around him. ~Red

You can make him have bed head, too. That's always fun...Or maybe he could run out of gel...Gawd imagine how much of that stuff he goes through!

i like this, and in a few episodes he has his hair dwn also its really long in the first volume of trigun maximum, but he has it cut and spiked, ne hoo dis rox hard