i'm sorry, but the fact that he has cross-eyes and that the jesus looks like a muppet really takes away from this. might've been good otherwise

I'm very truly sorry for not being able to comment earler!! Hope you can forgive me! ^^;; Anywho, I must say that this is definitely one of your best pics so far! Things to work on? I think you shouls work on the eyes. they look too cross-eyed in my opinion. In an intense battle like this, it should be a suspenseful type of scene. The crossed eyes sort of takes some of the feeling away. But everything else looks really good! Loves it alot! b^_^d -Rosa

Hey, guess what! I'm finally commenting on your pic! ^_~ Gomen for taking so long! First off, I must say you did an excelent job on the shading and clothing. everything has just the right look that I can guess what colors things would be if it were indeed in color. Kudos for that, because it's a hard effect to get. Not to mention your tears and stains are right on the mark, as always. Things to fix? Hmm, well as EAMR said, he does look a little cross-eyed. It kinda takes away from the dramatic look of his mouth and the cuts on his face. Also, his ear is a little high up. I've noticed that you tend to do that with your pics a lot. Remember that the top of the ear is always level with the bottom of the eye. Hmm, one last thing. While his legs look really good, you might want to increase the distance between the waist and the knees. All of the details are acurate, just too close together. Overall, a good job, though. Congrats! ^_^