OMG! I love the way you draw and COLOR! Though, no offense (as in PLEASE DON't HURT ME!!!!!!!!!! *Glomps*) I absolutely HATE your character >.> She's not very original, and WAYYYYYYY too many ocs have automail >.> Your character is a Sue... PLEASE DON'T HURT ME!!!!!!

Pfft. Manly? Where? I think it looks fine! Not all female characters have to be perfect. Like me. >.> I'm not manly. I've got broad shoulders. So. It's not manly, was my point. I wish I could draw my OC that well... -le sigh-

Do you have a fam fic to go with your drawlings?

OMG!! I love it! I like how you draw! XD

Dang, I so envy you... I'm having some trouble with my character ^-^u You rock!!

WOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!! :P She's..... :}!! Beautiful!! You are really good!! Do mine!! Do mine!! *Jumpin up and down* Seriously, you did great, I don't really see "manliness".. all female to me!...;} Great job!

It is DEFINITELY getting better but even this picture has a bit of a manly figure. simply making the waist thinner and the top wider doesnt change that, what you did is a bit too triangular. think, (as clich� as it may sound) hourglass shape. try curving the frame a bit more. I hope that didnt sound too dictating. I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism, if it came off as mean or rude, I apologize sincerely

AWSOME!! This is cool she looks cool i wish i could draw this good!^_-

wow nice coloring job!............. lahv it!........