do you have a girl friend? if so you need to study her shape. girls we have more curves we are not as bulky. thats why its easer for me to draw guys they have hardly any curves. but not bad for your first try. you saw my first guy I drew. your good on the heads but need to work on the bodys. thats all I have to say good job ^_^

i agree with caprice the eyes look really koolie^.^good job!

Oh, I like it. You did a really good job on her. Especially her eyes.