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    Pleiades Rising

    Otaku Idol (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/27/06 | Reply

    Proportion is tricky, but I do like the pose. He has a nice laid back look. The coloring has a cel shaded look to it. One of the things I always look at is the eyes. I like how you paid attention to that small detail. Small details can make a pic that much better. Nice solidly colored pic!

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    Shireishou

    Otaku Legend | Posted 03/26/06 | Reply

    U coloring it well. But i think U should pay more attention in human proportion. Esp how U draw his body (finger) But over all, is great job! (I vote for yes) U wrote fafic? Wow.. that's awesome! My English is very bad. That's why I can;t write fiction

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    dragonxcannon111

    Otaku Legend | Posted 03/26/06 | Reply

    Cough I don't think Guys can have kids...or... can they? Anyway that story should be rated M cause of the sexuality thing..