Nice pic ^^ Adding a little extra shading(usually 3-4 tones total is good, but thats just me.) would make it even better, I think. Working on the placement of the jawbones might help a little too, making them a little more even would probably be good. ^^

Nice pic. I like the detail to the clothes and eye color. you're good!

ooh...cool!! do you thinks yuo should do it?! well wha` eve`

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