@SaturnSakura:

Well you could of done a couple of things differently. Just for example: could be one transparent picture with some one cryign hard and then a bigger picture with a dark and heavy rainfall and the girl smashing the window or bangign on it maybe while holding tears or emotions back.

@Air-Dragon:

well thank you. what do you think i could have done differently.

Nice wave of colors but it don't think they match the words.