Oh! Well, I like what you did. :) I definitely think it looks better. It's certainly not too red...it's just right. I like the text a lot more now. ^__^
Okay so I went back and edited it (see description for details) and it's definitely better I think...but is it too red now?
ahh well there's always something going to be wrong with it...thanks for the great feedback though! I saw this comment after I changed the card so I didn't really follow your advice but I hope you like the new version too ^^
OOh. This one is nice, too. :) Though I agree on the text. What I think is...the smaller text is either unnecessary or should be aligned with "you're my sweet addiction." OR it should all be white because it's incredibly hard to read some of it! BUT. Overall, I like this. Great use of textures and color. :3
belletoile
Grand Otaku | Posted 02/22/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
Oh goodie! thanks for all the help and feedback ^^
~hugs
belletoile
Grand Otaku | Posted 02/22/11 | Reply
@rosel D:
Thanks so much!! I thought it was perfect for the scan when I thought of it and it sounds perfectly yaoi-ish ^^
~hugs
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 02/22/11 | Reply
@belletoile:
Oh! Well, I like what you did. :) I definitely think it looks better. It's certainly not too red...it's just right. I like the text a lot more now. ^__^
rosel D
GRAND PIZZA LORD (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/22/11 | Reply
Love the text "could I just eat you up?"♥♥♥
Pretty GerIta card~♥♥♥
belletoile
Grand Otaku | Posted 02/22/11 | Reply
@Angel Zakuro:
Okay so I went back and edited it (see description for details) and it's definitely better I think...but is it too red now?
ahh well there's always something going to be wrong with it...thanks for the great feedback though! I saw this comment after I changed the card so I didn't really follow your advice but I hope you like the new version too ^^
~hugs
Angel Zakuro
bird nerd. (Otaku Angel) | Posted 02/21/11 | Reply
OOh. This one is nice, too. :) Though I agree on the text. What I think is...the smaller text is either unnecessary or should be aligned with "you're my sweet addiction." OR it should all be white because it's incredibly hard to read some of it! BUT. Overall, I like this. Great use of textures and color. :3